Essay Review

Get your essay reviewed by Oba.

Written notes + a Loom walkthrough of your essay. 5–7 day turnaround. Built for deferred applicants who have a draft and want real feedback before submitting.

What you get

  • ✓Written margin comments on structure, narrative, and what’s working vs. what’s not
  • ✓A Loom video walkthrough (10–15 min) where Oba talks through the feedback
  • ✓School-specific framing notes — what this school is actually looking for in this prompt
  • ✓One revision round: send the updated draft and get a final pass

Who this is for

You have a draft. It’s not garbage, but you’re not sure if it’s working. You want a second set of eyes from someone who got into Stanford GSB deferred, has coached applicants into HBS, Wharton, and Stanford, and understands what makes a deferred applicant’s story different from a traditional MBA applicant’s.

This is not for essays you haven’t started. It’s for essays you’re ready to improve.

One essay
$99
Written feedback + Loom + one revision round
5–7 business day turnaround

Common questions

Can I submit multiple essays?
Each review covers one essay. Purchase once per essay.
What schools do you cover?
Any deferred MBA program: Stanford GSB, HBS 2+2, Wharton Moelis, Booth Scholars, Columbia DEP, MIT Sloan, Darden, Kellogg, and others.
How do I submit my essay?
After purchasing, you’ll be directed to a submission form. You’ll share the essay text, the prompt, your target school, and a brief background note.
Is this different from full coaching?
Yes. Full coaching ($3,500/yr or $400/mo) covers the entire process — narrative development, all essays, recommenders, school research, and interview prep. An essay review is a single-essay turnaround for people who are already deep in the process and need targeted feedback.